You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter
o Give details of the situation
o Describe the documents
o Say what action you want the post office to take.
Dear Mr. Long,
I have been a satisfied customer until this month when my documents that sent by your post have not arrived in time. This makes me worried because the documents need to be applied at WES Canada before 27th March.
The documents are very important for me because it includes my transcript and my degree that has to arrive at WES, Canada to be assessed whether it is equivalency to Canada’ s Master degree or not. I’m sure you will appreciate this is a urgent case to solve as soon as possible.
I would be very grateful if you could check immediately where my documents are now. And I ask you to confirm in writing which action you will take to deal with this delay and when my documents can arrive at WES’ office.
I’m looking forward to receiving your prompt response.
Kind regards,
Lien Tran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t. I’m sure you will appreciate this is a urgent case to solve as soon as possibl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59459459459 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40073187039 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6655701636 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205399897354 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080816944971 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654308373279 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116361136788 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681473966135 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.