Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a controversial statement heating a debate over the fact that studying a foreign language when the children are at primary school is better than later time. Every trend has the pros and cons, and this is not exception, I strongly believe that the benefits outweigh its counterpart.
It is undoubted that allowing the pupils to approach a foreign language at the early stage of life will lead them to forget the mother language, that they are not profficient enough. Actually, the children adapt new things so quickly that they gradually ignore the native words. Even though, my sons, at the age of ten and twelve, speak English more fluently than Vietnamese although their parents are Vietnamese.
On the other hand, when teaching a second language for children at primary school has many advantages. Firstly, training pronunciation for younger students is easier than those who are older because of their soft toungue. The little pupils speak naturally and exactly what they hear from the teacher. Especially, if they are taught by native speaker, they will be quickly fluent. Secondly, there is not much homework at school so they have plenty of time to practice new language without affecting anything when comparing with those who are at higher level of study. Many recent studies have proved that learning foreign language early will be much more efficient for children.
In conclusion, although there are some negative impacts on children when studying a second language early, they still get a lot of benefits that need for their development in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54322643921 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4913410176 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287087686624 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100689484145 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859558634923 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173908380434 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839625169646 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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