You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the unpleasant accident in your hotel. It happen on October 1st, when my family decided to stay there for two nights.
The problem is that the hotel left our room without the central heating. On arrival, the temperature outside was 25 degree above zero, but at night it fell below 10 degree. We woke up at 1:00 am, as soon as it became unbearably cold in the bedroom. Although I phone the reception, they told me that they could only fix it in the morning. Therefore, to keep warm, my family had to sleep in the clothing.
Nobody came to mend the central heading next day. As a result, I had to purchase a portable heater, but the manager informed that I would have to pay extra for the excessive use of electricity. In addition, we did not have hot water at all. As a solution, my wife resorted to heating the water in the kettle.
In conclusion, it is clear what difficulties my household experienced, while staying in your hotel. I am frustrated to have decided to spend time in that unlucky room. I would like you to give us compensation for this disappointment with hot water by both paying a full refund and apologizing personally.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...e unpleasant accident in your hotel. It happen on October 1st, when my family decided ...
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Line 13, column 228, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watered'.
Suggestion: watered
...icity. In addition, we did not have hot water at all. As a solution, my wife resorted...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67579908676 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71694485968 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657534246575 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1637015117 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159588727169 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459517547523 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497195145524 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954156120522 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471298985873 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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