Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing with regard to the visiting I have had with my family from the “king Place” which was quite delightful and memorable event.
I could make a reservation for 3 persons last week as we traveled to your city and we had chance to spend quality time there. You have my deepest thanks as your hospitality were unexpectable and your team ‘s behavior was appealing.
Your employees are really polite, friendly and sociable which mad us comfortable to communicate with them easily. Secondly, it is obvious that they are well-trained and professional in their career as their explanation in tour was enlightening and amusing as well.
Although I admit that you are master in building a powerful team, I would like to make a suggestion to improve the quality of your process which results in increasing customer satisfaction. Honestly, you need to revise the dress code that you are using for the staff and find an expert to design an appropriate custom which helps visitors to feel the atmosphere of the time that king was living there.
If your need further information in this regard please inform me.
Yours faithfully,
David
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91878172589 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76563578068 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2831097373 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212940316302 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817088504908 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490084674776 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973234997012 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443216668896 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.