You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it. Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter, introduce yourself; explain what went wrong with the car you rented; ask for some form of compensation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter for complaining about your rented car. Last week I rented a car from your Kottayam branch, vehicle number KL-31-165, Mahindra Xuv 2014, model. I have decided to quit your service for certain problems occurred during the rental period.
There are couples of reason why, I felt the car is suit as per my expectations. Firstly, your signed agreement show that car is perfect and good condition. But unfortunately, when I used the vehicle first time and trace certain problems. It's engine is not working properly when, shifted to second gear as a result of breakdown on road. Moreover, I spent Rs. 40000/- for additional maintenance and service and also informed your regional branch but I did not get a positive reply from their side.
My humble request to you please refund the money when, I used to spent extra maintenance cost which is not mentioned your agreement. In addition, take the necessary action against your staff members for their misconduct and immediately replace this car as soon as possible.
Expecting a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully
XYZ
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|---|---|---|---|
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eriod. There are couples of reason why, I felt the car is suit as per my expecta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07486631016 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63812569246 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68449197861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1972796707 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201364832895 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703006515381 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571274807805 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112220517986 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656050466481 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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