Even though globalisation brought benefit to many countries its negative side should. Not forgotten. To what extent do you agree.?
Globalisation means integration the world Into one huge market and destroy all trade barriers and create a good relation among nations. It has some negative side for the present scenario. Hence, this essay deals that it is beneficial to humans in a global perspective although its darker side should not overlooked.
As regards the blighter aspects of globalization it has a wide acceptance all over the world, especially developing nations in several fields. For a clear example trade and commerce between nations have to grown to such an extent that many developing countries like as India, have achieved their economic growth and prosperity never dreamed of before. Technological exchange is another major advantage resulting in the very large growth of information technology and its manifold blessings. Meanwhile, global cooperation and better understand between nations now.
Moreover, trade and commerce in the developing world eventually cause the destruction of small and medium sized industries in this countries. The developing countries will have to depend entirely on the developed ones for many products in future. Global environment will be negatively affects our domestic product market for a better example, decline the price of domestic rubber products in the Indian market. Similarly, brain drain phenomenon always attract to developing countries so that such provinces lose their meritorious manpower and its generation.
To wind up. Global market has brought benefits to the develop nations. However, many of these merits may prove to be harmful to their interest. Therefore, the should be more dangerous at present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'overlook'
Suggestion: overlook
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...of small and medium sized industries in this countries. The developing countries wil...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...on the developed ones for many products in future. Global environment will be negatively ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... Global market has brought benefits to the develop nations. However, many of these merits ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53784860558 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85415835252 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5079281923 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149369818366 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479652416074 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400002687242 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919890278547 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297544929297 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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