You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Swati,
This letter regards your kind invitation to visit your beautiful country Iran. Thanks so much for that. Despite the fact that I cant wait to see you in person again; I would have some queries regarding your country before I start to plan anything.
Firstly, please do let me know about the likings of your family as in what would they like to get from here. It would be an absolute pleasure to get something they would like and cheris from my country, India.
Furthermore, as Iran is so beautiful and culturally rich country, I would be intrigued to know what all I can participate in so as to enjoy the vast myriad of cultural activities over there in the limited time I have. Then after, you may want to introduce me to the traditional attire of the society so that I can bring some of them of my own or buy there only an to be a right fit in there.
Last but not the least, please do let me know the vegetarian choices we might have there as I am strictly vegetarian. I am super excited to try the different cuisine and flavours there and can not contain any excitement.
I never thought that we would meet so soon, but thanks to your kindness and graciousness that we would be able to be together soon. I am so looking forward to meet hyou and your family.
Yours best,
Jack Nicolson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... much for that. Despite the fact that I cant wait to see you in person again; I woul...
^^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...d to know what all I can participate in so as to enjoy the vast myriad of cultural activ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ome of them of my own or buy there only an to be a right fit in there. Last but...
^^
Line 11, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t we would be able to be together soon. I am so looking forward to meet hyou and ...
^
Line 11, column 157, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... together soon. I am so looking forward to meet hyou and your family. Yours best, J...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42213114754 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42421756966 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0557197097 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16180848027 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605878924834 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690919576387 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870872205805 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944922897614 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.