You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I would like to participate in Advance Architectural Design Seminar which is going to be held in Canada. I read about the seminar in an advertisement and would further like to know more details.
I am quite eager to attend this as it is going to welcome various speakers from around the world, which will surely help me to boost my career.
As per the advertisement, the date given is 12th October. Could please inform me of the duration period of the seminar as it would help me to plan my schedule for booking the tickets. Besides, I would like to know in detail about the itinerary of the seminar since it would help me to prepare priorly for any interactive sessions. As I have never traveled to Canada before, could you further suggest to me accommodation and how much will it cost for the duration? This will help me to budget my expenses. As well as let me know the cost of the event and what all things would be included.
Waiting to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Andrew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 540, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2021'.
Suggestion: September 2021
...ays or single day starting from 21st of September, 2021 and time slots in which seminar will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71232876712 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57661324261 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5168977702 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275799031369 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124751142581 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800576117538 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17096602169 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615739894884 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.