You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost You do NOT need to write any address You s

Essay topics:

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.

Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You do NOT need to write any address.

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to enquire about 'Up-to-date Arts & Design' seminar that is going to be held at UAE. Recently, I was going through the comapny's website and observed that this workshop is going to focus on fresh ideas and modern concepts of Interior Design. Even though I am interested in participating in this seminar, I would also be keen on joining few other workshops as well provided that they cover topics of modern design, construction and materials.

Could I get a more detailed information about this seminar such as dates of the workshop since the wesite had limited details. Because I live in India, I need to plan out my bookings as per the current global pandemic. Do participants need to quarantine in case they are double vaccinated? Also, are the organisers providing any means of accommodation or should it be borne by us?

I would also request for a detailed itenary of all the programs that will be held in this upcoming seminar along with their respective time slots. Lastly, would you kindly provide the different costing packages including accommodation with food per person.

I shall greatly appreciate your assistance! Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Yours faithfully,
Manjyot Kaur

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05633802817 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81679591799 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680751173709 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3752470348 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261045062371 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085950020546 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467301891937 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146815314159 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434850549594 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.