You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear Kate,
How are you? Thanks for accepting to take care of my home and dog during my vacation. I almost cancelled the holiday when I couldn't find someone to help out.
My holiday is starting on the September 15 and I'm jetting out to New Delhi the same day. I'll be staying at Hotel Tropicana and in case you need to contact me, please call the hotel's customer care on 01896754 and tell them to transfer you to Alfred on room 112. You can also reach me through my personal email and for urgent matters, please use my WhatsApp or BBM.
Katy, is a difficult dog. She finds it difficult to cling to strangers easily, however, by the time you feed her for two consecutive periods, she will adjust to you. She needs to eat three times a day and her food is inside the fridge in the kitchen. Katy usually eats between Seven and Nine in the morning. The afternoon and evening meals are usually spaced between five and six hours from the previous meal. If you don't follow this regime, she may refuse to eat the food. You also need to bath her two times a day. I've affixed the instructions on how to do this on the dining table.
I'd also like that you take of the flowering plants in my parlor too. All you need to do is to water them twice a day and give them some fresh air. What I do is to open the windows during the day, but do not forget to close them at night or the house will be robbed.
Girl, I hope you enjoy your time with Katy.
Cheers,
Alfred.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
.... I almost cancelled the holiday when I couldnt find someone to help out. My holiday...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...day is starting on the September 15 and Im jetting out to New Delhi the same day. ...
^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... jetting out to New Delhi the same day. Ill be staying at Hotel Tropicana and in ca...
^^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
...you need to contact me, please call the hotels customer care on 01896754 and tell them...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ix hours from the previous meal. If you dont follow this regime, she may refuse to e...
^^^^
Line 7, column 489, Rule ID: TO_BATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to bathe'?
Suggestion: to bathe
...y refuse to eat the food. You also need to bath her two times a day. Ive affixed the in...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 518, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... also need to bath her two times a day. Ive affixed the instructions on how to do t...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... how to do this on the dining table. Id also like that you take of the flowerin...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.220444632235 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.173076923077 0.167888034529 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0288461538462 0.0606518309736 48% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.0506257000042 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.115384615385 0.118615021944 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0897435897436 0.107062808482 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0224358974359 0.041066498444 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.06447553934 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0544871794872 0.0385302599488 141% => OK
Particles: 0.00320512820513 0.00132118243153 243% => OK
Determiners: 0.0801282051282 0.0714148451538 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128205128205 0.0191574576366 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00961538461538 0.00930345855455 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1462.0 1141.60824742 128% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.134020619 137% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18439716312 5.53046319177 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78085437643 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.22695035461 0.284621296913 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.156028368794 0.211203875043 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0851063829787 0.133321485273 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0425531914894 0.0843313296314 50% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06447553934 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.622163163488 98% => OK
Word variations: 67.1631474043 62.8969750728 107% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 12.9587628866 147% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8421052632 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3592148366 44.7399317507 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9473684211 90.9928171075 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.315789473684 0.613754768223 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.09278350515 382% => OK
Readability: 30.4449421426 37.5504026743 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.04901960784 1.13073093955 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303198261524 0.331212695627 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0907641551483 0.0927372745006 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0869653111929 0.0736520305886 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.513676468149 0.579516596996 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192325938008 0.180689518051 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108754913364 0.122183219658 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675151116573 0.0765303033291 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275069158894 0.211926503985 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.141280532258 0.0737400523855 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191596958598 0.203819188451 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367425344334 0.067151250289 55% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.45360824742 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 8.32989690722 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.