You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter
• explain your situation
• describe the problems
• say what you would like to happen
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My friends and I are your tenants at the Plaza estate and We write to inform you of the challenges we are facing with the house. The house we occupy is the bungalow at 72 Agui Road. It has four bedrooms and there are three of us sharing it. It is a lovely place and suits our purpose as students. However, there are a few things that we need you to look into.
The roof is leaking into the living room, leaving our books and other valuables damaged each time it rained. In addition, the compound is always flooded above knee level, even with a tiny rainfall, that no one is able to go out from or come into the premises, whenever it rains. We also find the rent very high and would love to look for another student who would move into the vacant room and share the rent with us. This way we will see a reduction in what each person pays.
We will be very happy if you work on this repairs quickly and as well, assent to our request of bringing in an additional person and hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... We will be very happy if you work on this repairs quickly and as well, assent to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214285714286 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.160714285714 0.167888034529 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0401785714286 0.0606518309736 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0491071428571 0.0506257000042 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102678571429 0.118615021944 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107142857143 0.107062808482 100% => OK
Participles: 0.03125 0.041066498444 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.06233943487 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267857142857 0.0385302599488 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00446428571429 0.00132118243153 338% => OK
Determiners: 0.102678571429 0.0714148451538 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0178571428571 0.0191574576366 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133928571429 0.00930345855455 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1065.0 1141.60824742 93% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.134020619 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22058823529 5.53046319177 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78085437643 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.230392156863 0.284621296913 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.151960784314 0.211203875043 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.078431372549 0.133321485273 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0490196078431 0.0843313296314 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06233943487 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622163163488 106% => OK
Word variations: 69.9195093858 62.8969750728 111% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5454545455 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1483588797 44.7399317507 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 90.9928171075 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.613754768223 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 33.7415329768 37.5504026743 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.12857142857 1.13073093955 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266841001965 0.331212695627 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0979741921732 0.0927372745006 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0957686807614 0.0736520305886 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533979545015 0.579516596996 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209570266572 0.180689518051 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102608471022 0.122183219658 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745005101879 0.0765303033291 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.25386069446 0.211926503985 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104988099681 0.0737400523855 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188147264032 0.203819188451 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370183918543 0.067151250289 55% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.