Dear Sir / Madam
I had a pleasant stay at your hotel two weeks ago.I am writing this letter wondering if any of the hotel employees had found some clothes in my room. I checked in on the 10th of April and stayed a fortnight exactly.
I resided in room number 405, the one with a beach view. I forgot to pack a shirt and two pants. I think they were hanged on the bathroom's door back hanger. I am pretty sure that I left them there, as I have searched everywhere and could not find them.They are a white shirt with a picture of an eagle on the back of size 12, a light blue Levis jeans and Gap black pants both of size 32.
Please, send them to me by Aramex as soon as you got them and I will pay all the expenses.
I am sorry for disturbing you and really appreciate your consideration for this issue. Email me your bank account number with the cost of the delivery required to transfer the money immediately. Votes of thanks.
Yours Faithfully,
Engy Saeed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir / Madam I had a...
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Dear Sir / Madam I had a pleasant stay at your hotel two ...
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...easant stay at your hotel two weeks ago.I am writing this letter wondering if any...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...April and stayed a fortnight exactly. I resided in room number 405, the one wit...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... number 405, the one with a beach view. I forgot to pack a shirt and two pants. I...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I forgot to pack a shirt and two pants. I think they were hanged on the bathrooms...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bathrooms'' or 'bathroom's'?
Suggestion: bathrooms'; bathroom's
... pants. I think they were hanged on the bathrooms door back hanger. I am pretty sure that...
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...nged on the bathrooms door back hanger. I am pretty sure that I left them there, ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ched everywhere and could not find them.They are a white shirt with a picture of an ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s and Gap black pants both of size 32. Please, send them to me by Aramex as soo...
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...he money immediately. Votes of thanks. Yours Faithfully, Engy Saeed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33858603869 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3087487059 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0909090909 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204711695064 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585873284875 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633137536458 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108082117725 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831503206342 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.