You want to hold a surprise party for a friend who is visiting his home town after a long time from a foreign country. Write a letter to a common friend asking for his help in organizing the party and in your letter:
• Write the reasons for organizing the party
• Describe when, where and how you would be organizing the party
• Ask your friend to meet you in person for further discussions
You do not need to write any addresses.
Hello Johan,
I am writing this letter to inform you that our best friend Scote is coming back home from the Canada. He recently has graduated from Concordia University with distinction grades. Although he talk to us and his family member on daily basis over phone, he will be here after 4 year, so it would be better if we setup some arrival party for him.
I have some ideas related to party in my mind. His home will be the best place to conduct this party on the same day of his arrival in home. Firstly, we ask to permission from this family members to setup the party his home. To make the party unforgettable, we need to buy some specific party related items such as ballons which stay at air, some fancy light that create specific effects, decoration stuffs and food.
For all this, we need to meet at my home and then we go to Scote home to ask this family. Before to go his home, we have to discuss about all party setup and if you have some other suggestion then will be talk at that meeting.
I hope, we will make it best party ever for him.
Your faithful
Jamail Zia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Johan, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'talks'.
Suggestion: talks
...ty with distinction grades. Although he talk to us and his family member on daily ba...
^^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
... to permission from this family members to setup the party his home. To make the party u...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the best'.
Suggestion: it the best
... at that meeting. I hope, we will make it best party ever for him. Your faithful ...
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Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est party ever for him. Your faithful Jamail Zia
^^^^^
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for him. Your faithful Jamail Zia
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33495145631 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10774105246 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3121735767 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251371772851 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101712764717 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052208508832 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158301008946 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319549816006 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.