Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it.
Why are more people eating fast food?
What can be done about this problem?
Fast foods are considered to be unhealthy for the human body by the medical professionals but yet many are attracted by these food. Although, such foods are not suitable for human digestion system, people are mad to eating junk food. Individuals and governemnt should take action to control consumption of fast foods.
There are many reasons, for eating junk food, but most prominat is the tast and smell of it. While People like different kind of food such as man cooked or organic food, fast food are very delisious and it feels so tasty on the mouth. The ingredients, which are used in cooking of junk foods are different from the normal foods, that make it more fancy and tasty. From my experience, on the hostel, food was made by cooke from the home ingridents, the smell and tast of food was different from fast food, so I always prefer to go out side for the dinner and my target always was the junk food, apart from I was aware that food is bad for my health.
At government level and as a individual, both need to expose the unhealthy foods which are consumped on regulary basis. Authorities should invent some amount of money to organize campaignes on television about health issues caused by fast food. Individuals should made their healthly deit plan, that can be helpful to reduce the intake of junk food by eating home made or fruits.
In conclusion, all the doctor are on the same page regarding the unhealthness of fast food for people but people take it as regular meal. Smell and flavour of that foods are unbeatable to any other food, so puplic are cracy about it. There should be some awareness compaigns for showing the negative impact of fast food on human body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...essionals but yet many are attracted by these food. Although, such foods are not suitable ...
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Line 2, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, on the hostel, food was made by cooke from the home ingridents, the smell and ...
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Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...rom fast food, so I always prefer to go out side for the dinner and my target always was...
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Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[3]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'for dinner'.
Suggestion: for dinner
...food, so I always prefer to go out side for the dinner and my target always was the junk food,...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... my health. At government level and as a individual, both need to expose the unh...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to expose the unhealthy foods which are consumped on regulary basis. Authorities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40110159904 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7877906931 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369871948574 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145401109249 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649144457076 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244305813286 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052623485565 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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