You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager.In your letter, you should tell:•Who the person is•How did you know the person•Working experience of the person.•Why do you recommend the person?

Essay topics:

You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager.

In your letter, you should tell:
• Who the person is
• How did you know the person
• Working experience of the person.
• Why do you recommend the person?

Dear Sir/Madam,
I intend to write this letter to recommend a skillful professional for the available vacant position of service design expert in our organization. His name is Sam, 33 years old corporate professional with 9 years of diversified experience in the field of customer insights, design thinking and pioneer of service design concept inculcator in his previous organization. I and Sam are the same school graduates and we had shared the same room in the hostel as well. So I am well aware of his personal and professional expertise.
Sam has a tremendous track record of incorporating Service Design methodologies in some big multinational companies like Telenor and Citi Bank. He has been an influential asset that changed people’s perspective of handling corporate issues. His role has been instrumental in inculcating customer feedback in any new product development. Academically he is a certified scrum master and holds a Master degree in Design thinking from the Stanford University of London. I feel honored referring him to the aforementioned position as I am quite certain that he is going to add a lot of value using his skillsets and for building foundations of the service design concept in our organization. I have attached his resume for your reference as well.
Yours Sincerely,
John

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I intend to write this letter to recomme...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur reference as well. Yours Sincerely, John
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2358490566 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26679465412 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608490566038 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4229343121 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0528091542252 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237111569427 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347945478736 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424757844167 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363159545425 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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