You want to sell your TV. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you are selling the TV
• Describe the TV
• Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Tom,
Hope you're well. Congratulations on your recent graduation! I heard that you're moving into a new place closer to your office and I was wondering if you'd be interested in buying my old TV for your new place.
I've recently moved to a new apartment myself which is not so far from yours. My new place has a larger living room than my previous one so I need a bigger TV that would be appropriate for space. I was planning to buy a new TV and selling off the old one and you are the first person who came to my mind to get in touch with.
As you know, I have always been fond of video games and my old TV, therefore has the best picture quality suitable for displaying high-end graphics. It's a 50 inch 4K smart OLED TV from Samsung and it's in pristine condition. While there is a small dent on one of the HDMI ports in the back, it doesn't affect the aesthetics of the TVat all, nor does it affect the functioning of the HDMI Port or the TV. It has the original remote control with it and I'll even throw in an HDMI cable and batteries for the remote to get you up and running fast.
Although I've been very busy at work lately, I have some time next weekend. How about you come over to my place then and check it out? If you like it, I'll even help you carry it to your place. I'm planning to sell it for $200, which is less than half the price I got it for.
Do let me know if you'd be interested. You can call or text me anytime if you're curious to know more and to let me know when you'd become. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Tejas
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- Test 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Tom, Hope youre well. Congratulations on your recent gr...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...on your recent graduation! I heard that youre moving into a new place closer to your ...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...r to your office and I was wondering if youd be interested in buying my old TV for y...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...buying my old TV for your new place. Ive recently moved to a new apartment mysel...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...table for displaying high-end graphics. Its a 50 inch 4K smart OLED TV from Samsung...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...n one of the HDMI ports in the back, it doesnt affect the aesthetics of the TVat all, ...
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Line 7, column 450, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...the original remote control with it and Ill even throw in an HDMI cable and batteri...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...et you up and running fast. Although Ive been very busy at work lately, I have s...
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Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... then and check it out? If you like it, Ill even help you carry it to your place. I...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...l even help you carry it to your place. Im planning to sell it for 00, which is le...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...rice I got it for. Do let me know if youd be interested. You can call or text me ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ted. You can call or text me anytime if youre curious to know more and to let me know...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...us to know more and to let me know when youd become. I look forward to hearing from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 312.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04166666667 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15166775904 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2985550158 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1764705882 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326909452408 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104801614357 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864779956338 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173883427826 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651593812037 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.