You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• Explain why you are selling the television
• Describe the television
• Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Sajith,
Hope this letter finds you well.I am writing this letter to tell you that I am planning to sell my television.It is a 64 inch wide-screen Apple TV with all the latest features.Also,it is in warranty period.We bought it around 6 months ago and is in a very good condition.It inculdes battery bag,remote,internet dongle and an Amazon voucher.
The reason for selling my television is we are buying a new LCD for our drawing room.As you are aware that we have shifted to a new house which is much more bigger than the previous one.That's why we thought LCD will suit best in the drawing room.Drawing room wall is wide and it will be easy to fit.
Before shifting, you came to our old flat and you said you liked my big TV.So I thought to ask you first.Next Friday at 6 o'clock would be feasible for me. Let me know your availibility for the same. I will come home early from office that day as my project is over.So we can spend some time together as well.
Best Regards,
Suresh Menon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sajith, Hope this letter finds you well.I am wri...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...jith, Hope this letter finds you well.I am writing this letter to tell you that...
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Suggestion: It
...hat I am planning to sell my television.It is a 64 inch wide-screen Apple TV with ...
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Suggestion: Also
...n Apple TV with all the latest features.Also,it is in warranty period.We bought it a...
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Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ple TV with all the latest features.Also,it is in warranty period.We bought it arou...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: We
... features.Also,it is in warranty period.We bought it around 6 months ago and is in...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: It
...ths ago and is in a very good condition.It inculdes battery bag,remote,internet do...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , remote
...y good condition.It inculdes battery bag,remote,internet dongle and an Amazon voucher. ...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...e buying a new LCD for our drawing room.As you are aware that we have shifted to a...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e buying a new LCD for our drawing room.As you are aware that we have shifted to a...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...ve shifted to a new house which is much more bigger than the previous one.Thats why we thou...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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... much more bigger than the previous one.Thats why we thought LCD will suit best in th...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: That's
... much more bigger than the previous one.Thats why we thought LCD will suit best in th...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Drawing
... LCD will suit best in the drawing room.Drawing room wall is wide and it will be easy t...
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...d flat and you said you liked my big TV.So I thought to ask you first.Next Friday ...
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Suggestion: Next
...my big TV.So I thought to ask you first.Next Friday at 6 oclock would be feasible fo...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: o'clock
...ought to ask you first.Next Friday at 6 oclock would be feasible for me. Let me know y...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...m office that day as my project is over.So we can spend some time together as well...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e time together as well. Best Regards, Suresh Menon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4347826087 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75382102646 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.129561393 44.8134815571 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.0 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227767141587 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891664128374 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571968738509 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135147440427 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517126261176 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.