Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards of my absence from the team meeting held yesterday. I was in my office when I received an urgent call regarding my aunt's health issue. She had suffered an heart attack and was taken to the hospital quickly.
My aunt lives alone and very far from our house. Her son has been overseas on work trip, So there was no one to take care of her at that devastating time. I had to leave in a hurry. I could not even collect my belongings properly because of the urgency. I have talked to my colleagues, They will help me to catch up with the important updated of the meeting. As I am still at the hospital, I will request you to allow few days off from work. I will be in touch with me fellow workers.
I hope for cooperation from your side and I promise to catch up with all the important updates that I will be missing during my absence.
Thank you
Your Sincerely
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in regards of my absence from the team meeting held y...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...my aunts health issue. She had suffered an heart attack and was taken to the hospi...
^^
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ngings properly because of the urgency. I have talked to my colleagues, They will...
^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my absence. Thank you Your Sincerely XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27428571429 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38430240515 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0445653219 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235025156856 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801557404596 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728510756952 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136155817752 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400749948339 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.