you were hurt in a minor accident inside the a super market, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
write a letter to manger of the super market. In your letter
1. say who you are
2. give details about the accident
3. suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about a minor accident that happened to me yesterday in your supermarket.
my name is Nguyen Minh tuan and I live in 47 Cresent Avenue, just two blocks from your store, which I have regularly visited since I moved to this area last year.
but yesterday was obviously not a good day for me. When I headed to the beverage section near the back of the market and started to go alongside the pallet racking, then one case of beer suddenly falled down from the height of 1 metre into my knee. it was luckily that the case is small and plastic-made, so i just got a minor hurt, but still i had to go to see my doctor for safety reasons.
As you know, it could be more dangerous if this happens to a child, so I would like you, as the manager, to look to this issue more carefully. In my opinion, this type of accident can easily be avoided by placing all cases of beer either at the bottom of the pallet racking or in the 1st level of the racks. By doing so, it will not fall out or, at least, minimize the chance of hurting any one.
Thank you for your time and hope you will treat my above recommendation with care.
Yours faithfully,
tuan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: My
... me yesterday in your supermarket. my name is Nguyen Minh tuan and I live in ...
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Suggestion: But
...ce I moved to this area last year. but yesterday was obviously not a good day ...
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Suggestion: It
...rom the height of 1 metre into my knee. it was luckily that the case is small and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., so i just got a minor hurt, but still i had to go to see my doctor for safety r...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...t least, minimize the chance of hurting any one. Thank you for your time and hope ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, at least, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30735930736 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30148371075 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645021645022 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3606722646 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170667258954 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634100909613 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623717829033 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103578332104 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726282611734 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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