You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about you the product I purchased was not working appropriately.
2 weeks ago, I bought a printer from your company. At first, it was working properly, and It used to saved my alot of time which I spend for going to printing shop and wait for my return. However, two days ago, it suddenly stop working, and whenever I gave command to printer there was an error occurred.
I am working as an "Assistant Director" in my company. Moreover, I have to prepare variois reports on daliy basis, and submitting these reports to chairman. However, due to my printer problem, my work has been affecting. Furthermore,I am unable to submit my reports because it takes a lot of time to go in printing shop and takes print out of every report.
I want you to repair my printer as soon as poosible, and in the meanwhile give me another printer. As I mention above, my job has been affecting very much therefore; replace my printer with the new one because i do not have any time to waster anymore.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Kind Regards,
Ayesha Ashfaq
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...purchased was not working appropriately. 2 weeks ago, I bought a printer from you...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stops'?
Suggestion: stops
...urn. However, two days ago, it suddenly stop working, and whenever I gave command to...
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Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to printer there was an error occurred. I am working as an 'Assistant Direc...
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Line 6, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... my work has been affecting. Furthermore,I am unable to submit my reports because ...
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Line 6, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hop and takes print out of every report. I want you to repair my printer as soon ...
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Line 8, column 33, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... I want you to repair my printer as soon as poosible, and in the meanwhile ...
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Line 8, column 211, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ace my printer with the new one because i do not have any time to waster anymore....
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Line 8, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do not have any time to waster anymore. I am waiting for your prompt response. ...
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Line 10, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am waiting for your prompt response. Kind Regards, Ayesha Ashfaq
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Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your prompt response. Kind Regards, Ayesha Ashfaq
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76381909548 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94818600365 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613065326633 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4106286088 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.428571429 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162777986345 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782921593422 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548605320789 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103073106444 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364493856961 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.