Younglings have a dream to become or achieve something in their lives. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that teens should have big aims while others emphasize that it is normal if children do not have goals in their lives.
Apparently, various factors make a section of people think that juveniles should not stay ambitious and have many reasons to substantiate it First and foremost is the fact that not every youngster can be successful. For instance, there are many children coming from middle-class families who cannot afford the higher cost of their education. Due to this, most of the youngsters do not have the opportunities for better jobs or white-collar jobs after graduating from prestigious institutions. Besides, only one percent of this population coming from middle-class families achieve success their dreams by making goals in their lives. Since ambition means striving for success, only a few teens make great accomplishments because of pure conscientiousness.
On the other hand, some individuals believe that children should stay ambitious for several reasons. Chiefly, every person has a desire to prove his worth whether he or she is at any place in their life. For example, most of the grade A students have a tough competition among themselves because of peer pressure which leads students to highly ambitious because everyone wants to acquire first place but only one person deserves it.
In my view, youngsters should be enjoying their time by learning different things instead of focusing to become ambitious and worry about their future because teenagers can live enjoy their lives till the age of twenty because after the age of twenty, everyone start focusing more on their careers which in turn leads them to become ambitious in their lives.
In conclusion, as every coin has two sides, so, living with a dream or not matters the same as a coin. Also, it is understandable that plentiful parents want their children to be ambitious, but they might complete and achieve their goals and dreams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: A student; Students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18529411765 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79023724357 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4400000636 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.615384615 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142695707406 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052720861778 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619045440281 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077670601164 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420996026013 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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