You would like to invite a friend from another country to visit you for your birthday.
Write a letter inviting your friend, in you letter,
• Tell your friend about your birthday
• Explain why you want them to visit
• Offer your friend your spare room to stay in
Dear Ria,
I hope you are doing well.
It's been a long since we met each other, and it's my birthday next month. I really want you to get some time and make it for my birthday.
I'm turning 30 on 8th December, and I'm planning to have a grand celebration at my place in India. It will be a dinner party along with some karaoke and a short film. I was waiting for this time of the year, so that I can invite you here and have some good time together.
I'm inviting all of our batchmates from master's degree, and it's been a long time since we had a get together like this. So, it will be great idea if you come over for this party. It'll be holiday time, so I suggest you take 15 days off from your work, so that we can visit nearby places as well.
You will be surely staying with me all the time at my place. I have a four-bedroom house, and two of them are vacant. You can choose any one of them you like for your stay in India. I can also arrange your pickup from the airport.
I really hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Shaneet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ria, I hope you are doing well. Its been a l...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...een a long since we met each other, and its my birthday next month. I really want y...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...some time and make it for my birthday. Im turning 30 on 8th December, and Im plan...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ay. Im turning 30 on 8th December, and Im planning to have a grand celebration at...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...here and have some good time together. Im inviting all of our batchmates from mas...
^^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat we can visit nearby places as well. You will be surely staying with me all t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97129186603 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98227072338 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4123603775 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.3333333333 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258082599318 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09063057893 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872915989667 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138264867576 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07560582385 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.94 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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