Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to teacher asking for help.
• explain why your son needs help
• ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods
• suggest a possible schedule for the lessons.
Dear Mrs. Lean,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the French lessons you are providing to the students at school. More specifically, my son is one of your students in grade 8 where you are teaching this language.
Let me explain the situation in detail, my son's name is John Smith, he is a bright student, but he is finding some difficulty learning language in class with so many students. I would appreciate, if you could offer some one-to-one classes to him for some time, so that he can clear his doubts and gain expertise in it.
Furthermore, could I request you to please provide me some additional information about your private lessons including does these classes cover spoken or written French? Additionally, are you teaching any other student at home, and do you have any professional certification to teach this language?
I would appreciate if you could arrange the timing of the class in the evening around 6:00 P.M. I am working full-time in an accounting company, and it would be convenient for me to drop and pick him up from your place.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Shinny Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o drop and pick him up from your place. I look forward to hearing from you soon....
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84343434343 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73161364225 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.348374119 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194668584298 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755295486581 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475352467589 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950388023148 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622551812566 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.