You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter
Explain what type of car you would like
Give details of when you would like the car
Request more information about the cost
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to renting a car from your agency. I have always been a satisfied customer for several years and I know your rental services will be extremely fulfilling.
As l am going on a short trip on holiday with my household I have decided to rent a car with a sufficient space for ten people. The power of air conditioner is so important for me because this summer is too hot. In addition, I would like to have a car with comfortable seats as members of seniors will be accompanied by me. Overall, In my opinion, a model of B.M.V would be the best choice for my travel.
I am planning to travel between 5th and 15th of May. I would really prefer to get an appropriate car in the early morning.
Finally, l have no enough up-to-date information about the costs. I was wondering if you could send me the list of costs via E-mail.
I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible.
Kind Regards,
Sarah Smith
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| 2018-07-04 | Mehdi.Babaie | 88 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to renting a ca...
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...s will be extremely fulfilling. As l am going on a short trip on holiday with m...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
... Overall, In my opinion, a model of B.M.V would be the best choice for my travel....
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... send me the list of costs via E-mail. I look forward to receiving your respons...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se as soon as possible. Kind Regards, Sarah Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, may, really, so, in addition, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46927374302 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61464450857 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2889629704 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289260523098 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823911389278 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06440675279 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123468049574 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546550071218 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.