You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend.
write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain why you are no longer using your bicycle.
describe your bicycle.
explain why you think your friend would like to have it.
Dear John,
I hope you are well and sorry I haven't written to you for ages. I want to let you know, that I decided to sell my bicycle. As I remember you always liked to have a bike, so I thought you'd be interested to buy my bike.
As you know, I work as marketing manager and I have no more external time to riding and it's my job demanding. On the other side, I have moving to a new apartment and my new place is enough far way from office, then I have to get to work by bus. The last reason is we have a big GYM with all kind of facilities in our office, and I try to get my regular exercise there.
Let me explain my bicycle's features. It is a really nice ten-speed racing bicycle, so it's lightweight and fast. In addition, it is very nice silver color with golden lines. I promise you'd like it if you see it.
As I remember, you always liked to riding your own bike. so when I decided to sell my bike, I prefer to tell you at the first. I can sell it to you at a special price.
Let me know if you are interested, and we'll discuss the price.
Best wishes,
Mahsa
- Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:•Say why you would like to go on the trip•Sugges 56
- A company is organising a trip abroad for language training to a number of limited places. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should:• express That you want to join• say why you think you should join• explain why the o 78
- You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend.write a letter to your friend. In your letterexplain why you are no longer using your bicycle.describe your bicycle.explain why you think your friend would like to have 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities Others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together Discuss both views and give your own opinion 53
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ohn, I hope you are well and sorry I havent written to you for ages. I want to let ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...ways liked to have a bike, so I thought youd be interested to buy my bike. As you...
^^^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ave no more external time to riding and its my job demanding. On the other side, I ...
^^^
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...lver color with golden lines. I promise youd like it if you see it. As I remember...
^^^^
Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...u always liked to riding your own bike. so when I decided to sell my bike, I prefe...
^^
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l you at the first. I can sell it to you at a special price. Let me know if yo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, then, well, in addition, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 3.98623853211 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23462303444 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55504587156 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6848368923 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298928438375 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104826455739 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077292728525 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166805164714 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766562745851 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.27 8.71597938144 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.