Dear An,
I am writing this email to tell you that I can’t go to your farewell party on Sunday of the coming week. I am extremely sorry you, I know you might be disappointing with this now.
I believe that you know my family went to holiday trip last week. However, after we go back home, my son was disease. We had to take him to the hospital and stay all the night there that I can't go to your farewell party. Today, doctor had treat to him, thus his health was improve. Nevertheless, the doctor has required him there for his health recovery complete.
I want invite you to small party at a restaurant near my house on Friday. Honestly, we want sorry you. We have working together for 3 threes and many remember events of I and you. You have helped a lots of my job. I also learn many experiences when working with you.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
Yours sincerely,
TTT
- Your colleague has invited you to his farewell party. You will not be able to attend the party, write a letter to the friend-explain the situation-say why you will not be attendin- say something about the period you have worked together and his/her work 56
- You received an email from your English friend Susan She asked you some information about one of your friends Read part of her email below I ve just got an email from your friend Mai She says she is going to do a course in London this Summer She asks if s 66
- Recently the role of men and women in the family has changed Men tend to spend more time taking care of their family Women go to work and pursue their careers Is this a positive or negative development Give your opinion 65
- You received an email from your English friend Susan She asked you some information about one of your friends Read part of her email below I ve just got an email from your friend Mai She says she is going to do a course in London this Summer She asks if s 86
- Test 1 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'An'?
Dear An, I am writing this email to tell you th...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tal and stay all the night there that I cant go to your farewell party. Today, docto...
^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...r had treat to him, thus his health was improve. Nevertheless, the doctor has required ...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...er events of I and you. You have helped a lots of my job. I also learn many experienc...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, honestly, however, nevertheless, so, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45762701718 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0101063534 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5384615385 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324309141848 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117249573835 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061074099034 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19221050009 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648033800031 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.