Dear Sam,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you well. I haven’t forgotten our plan to attend the premiere of Iron Mans’ sequel next week. However, sadly, I won’t be able to join you this time.
You remember, I told you about the plan of my brother-in-law that he’s intending to visit me in the coming months? He has arrived yesterday, and it was a surprise for me because he hadn’t informed me about the specific date of arrival. Since he is here, I’m supposed to take him to another city for some official work.
However, the plan of matching premier must not be canceled for you. So, I spoke to our common friend Ali the other night, as he is back in town to spend his annual vacation and shared the whole situation. As he already wanted to meet you, I think both of you can hang out after watching the show together.
This will allow you not to miss the show and you can have a chitchat with him as well, as he is our good friend from the past. Not only that, but you could also talk to him about your thoughts on visiting Dubai for job hunt as he presently lives there and would probably share with you some relevant information.
I am sorry for messing our plan, but we can go together some other time.
Enjoy the movie and write back to me how it was perceived by the audience.
Warm wishes,
Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45019920319 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36133680221 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4463142536 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325862447039 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109769111245 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754827214183 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157876742648 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781552230607 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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