Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
● Explain why you cannot go anymore
● Say who can go instead of you
● Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Kim,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to tell you about some changes in our plan for watching 'Science today' together that you have arranged a few days ago.
I appreciate your plan to see the movie together, but unfortunately, I'll have to pass this time. I will be out of town on that day as I have to participate in an important seminar about robotics. This is a last-minute decision taken by our principal, so it is unavoidable.
I know how eagerly you are waiting to see the movie. I really don't want you to cancel your tickets, therefore, my cousin, James will accompany you to watch the film. He is fascinated by the science fiction genre.
I am pretty much sure he is a perfect mate to watch this cinema as he followed all the previous series. Moreover, he can clarify the doubts you have related to the previous series
Please tell me your thoughts at the earliest. I am waiting for your reply.
Warm Regards,
Antony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at you have arranged a few days ago. I appreciate your plan to see the movie t...
^
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... the movie together, but unfortunately, Ill have to pass this time. I will be out o...
^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... movie together, but unfortunately, Ill have to pass this time. I will be out of tow...
^^^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ortunately, Ill have to pass this time. I will be out of town on that day as I ha...
^
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...rly you are waiting to see the movie. I really dont want you to cancel your tickets, theref...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... are waiting to see the movie. I really dont want you to cancel your tickets, theref...
^^^^
Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you have related to the previous series Please tell me your thoughts at the earl...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your reply. Warm Regards, Antony
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58857142857 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56943414719 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4963923274 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9166666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265380511399 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899855739125 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836976057337 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144949203316 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851465460251 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.