Your friend is moving to your neighbourhood next weekend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- offer to help your friend move
- Explain when and how you can help
- give them some useful information about the local area
Dear John,
How're you? How is family? I'm thrilled to pieces about your decision to relocate to my neighborhood. Anyway, I am glad we'll finally be neighbours, i can't wait to show you around.
Thankfully, I'm on a two-week annual leave from work, therefore, I have enough time at hand, assisting you in moving your luggage wouldn't be a problem. I hope you won't mind if i come over to your place with my truck on friday to help you pack luxury items such as TV and other electronics
Although, I had the intention of travelling to the United States but I will change my plans so as to avail myself . Since you know how much strength I have, why don't you just assign the heavy duties to me? Carrying furniture wouldn't be a hassle at all.
By the way, have you heard a few things about this great neighborhood? Clearly, it is known for its security but please avoid late-night movement because of the recent robberies that occurred. Luckily, a new superintendent has been assigned and he can be contacted anytime of the day.
Anyway, let me know what you think about my offer. See you soon
Your friend,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ear John, Howre you? How is family? Im thrilled to pieces about your decision ...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., I am glad well finally be neighbours, i cant wait to show you around. Thankf...
^
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...I am glad well finally be neighbours, i cant wait to show you around. Thankfully,...
^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...wait to show you around. Thankfully, Im on a two-week annual leave from work, t...
^^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...d, assisting you in moving your luggage wouldnt be a problem. I hope you wont mind if i...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t be a problem. I hope you wont mind if i come over to your place with my truck o...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nited States but I will change my plans so as to avail myself . Since you know how much ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ll change my plans so as to avail myself . Since you know how much strength I have...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... you know how much strength I have, why dont you just assign the heavy duties to me?...
^^^^
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... heavy duties to me? Carrying furniture wouldnt be a hassle at all. By the way, have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, if, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.592039801 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58473211643 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721393034826 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3227951671 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222430266249 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756411193849 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822639777294 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923628520566 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608512158576 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.