Dear David,
How's everything going? Hope you're well. I'm just writing to thank you for your presence and your special gift to my 25th anniversary last week.
You did such an incredible act! I'll always be grateful for the blue suit and the colourful tie you came with. You know we have been staying as best friends for a long time now. I couldn't bear to spend all of the rest of the days without expressing my gratitude to you. I think the article costs you big charges.
As an accountant, my job requires a range of smart clothes and that day, your gift was appropriate. I'll wear it on the forthcoming Monday of the next week. I'll look very new-fashioned.
I'm planning to organise a meet up with you. I'm seeing to point it at the end of the month at 7.30 p.m. You know as you're far from me, I've thought to thank you in another way.
Hope to hear from you very soon.
Warm wishes, Steven
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: How's
Dear David, Hows everything going? Hope youre well. Im j...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...r David, Hows everything going? Hope youre well. Im just writing to thank you for ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Hows everything going? Hope youre well. Im just writing to thank you for your pres...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...eek. You did such an incredible act! Ill always be grateful for the blue suit an...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
... You did such an incredible act! Ill always be grateful for the blue suit and the colo...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... as best friends for a long time now. I couldnt bear to spend all of the rest of the da...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... long time now. I couldnt bear to spend all of the rest of the days without expressing my ...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...nd that day, your gift was appropriate. Ill wear it on the forthcoming Monday of th...
^^^
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...he forthcoming Monday of the next week. Ill look very new-fashioned. Im planning...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t week. Ill look very new-fashioned. Im planning to organise a meet up with you...
^^
Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...lanning to organise a meet up with you. Im seeing to point it at the end of the mo...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...d of the month at 7.30 p.m. You know as youre far from me, Ive thought to thank you i...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
....30 p.m. You know as youre far from me, Ive thought to thank you in another way. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34911242604 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.320160522 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9711477352 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.5 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304835561909 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882229206371 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916440827909 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155236645191 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102982304931 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.06 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.01 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.