Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Now-a-days people often travel as compared to the past. There are several benefits for the travelers as well as for the country in where the individuals visit. I will discuss the reasons along with the benefits of both the traveler and the country in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, earlier the transport system was not that convenient as compared today. Only affluent people can think of travelling to some other country whereas middle class or deprived class people can not even think of buying a one way ticket as the fair at that time were super expensive. Moreover, only few numbers of trains and flights were available during those days. There were very few individuals who were earning handsome income rest were like wages. So, do you think it was possible for the one's to travel abroad with such a low-income?
However, as the world is evolving at fast pace so as the technology. Not only the transport systems but also some financial schemes such as loans, helps achieve dreams of many. As in today more people prefer to travel by air since it takes lesser time to reach any destination. Moreover the fairs are also similar or sometimes even lesser than train fair, if booked few months earlier. If anyone who do not want to make the full payment for Flight fair or for the Holiday Trip at a time, they are even allowed to pay it as EMI means one can pay it on monthly basis, which is indeed convenient for many individuals.Moreover, regarding the stay there are plethora of applications available to check online. One can not only book the ticket but also compare the rates and other amenities, then can decide by looking after the reviews of previous visitors experience. Furthermore, in today's modern era people love to post everything at social media sites such as on facebook. So, once someone post photograph's or video's of their holiday destination, it motives other users to visit the same place.
In addition to this, the country is also getting benefited by the tourist. The more tourist visits, the more economy they earn. Several ways the countries earn economy such as accommodation at hotel or resort, entry fees at any monuments they visit, the transport used by the tourist.
To recapitulate, as the economy is growing so the person's income's are. Moreover, the social media sites are the main platform from where people are getting motivated to travel .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, as for, i mean, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84146341463 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59045828512 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9518135904 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5238095238 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223462772724 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067740090783 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632542530106 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132927900201 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062794483608 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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