Your landlord wants to increase the rent. Write a letter to him telling him.
In your letter, you should tell:
* why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased.
* what you will do if it is increased.
Dear Mr Haryadi,
I am writing this letter in connection to your thought of rising the rent.
In my opinion, the rent should not be increased for two reasons. First of all, except for the rent, I have got to cover the utility bills by myself, including electricity, gas and Internet, which is a already heavy burden for me. With the rise of rent, I would suffer a potential economic issue. Apart from that, there is no additional benefit or service offered with an increasing rent. It means I am paying the extra money for nothing, which I believe is unfair to me.
If you insist that you must charge me more money for the accommodation, I would have to leave and find another apartment which costs a much more reasonable amount of money. I have a wonderful time living here, yet I could not afford a higher rent.
I hope you could take my consideration into account and I am looking forward to a positive response.
Yours faithfully
Jerry Wang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...electricity, gas and Internet, which is a already heavy burden for me. With the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, apart from, except for, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63742690058 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58736079718 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7233747437 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225984713042 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859340212645 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603303424503 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126948419408 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521002644834 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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