Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail-Suggest a speaker-say what they would contr

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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.

Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail
-Suggest a speaker
-say what they would contribute to the event
-explain why other people would be interested too

I am writing this letter in response to your invitation to suggest a guest speaker for your upcoming event. I know it is a charity event therefore the team expects a good number of audience.

In my opinion to gather a good count of audience, I should suggest a person with good reputation, an ability to convince the crowd with his speech and has great knowledge in books. With the above mentioned qualities the once that come to my mind is Doctor Wilson. He is a cardio-thoracic surgeon in MN HOSPITAL in our locality. He is an altruistic person,who did a lot of charity work.

Even though, he did a lot which is beyond expectations;he is a simple person with approachable personality. In this way he can be a appropriate guest for your event as he can be considered as the role model for children, teenagers and for the students. As he is already a known person in our locality, crowd will also be interested in knowing deep about him and his interest in books.

Yours truly,
venkat.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...our locality. He is an altruistic person,who did a lot of charity work. Even thou...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...able personality. In this way he can be a appropriate guest for your event as he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60112359551 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89168714833 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0844643837 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16630688793 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674851294752 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876458239091 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124796013077 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083409687696 0.0580467560999 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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