You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.
Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail:
• suggest a speaker
• say what they would contribute to the event
• explain why other people would be interested too
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your e-mail as follows:
Dear...,
Dear Mr.Thomas,
I hope this letter finds you in a great health. Thank you for reaching out to me. It is a pleasure to be a part of our bookshop. Few people who I know can be a better fit for our shop opening ceremony.
But I think Miss Prajakta seems to be perfect as a guest speaker. Although she is an influencer in the social media, she has done some exemplary work. Recently she is been in the acting too. Moreover, her book titled "The sky is the limit" is launched a month ago.
Secondly, her fearless speech and attitude can ispire the viewers. We can take a small interview to know more about her furitful journey. If she is interested, she can accompany with some more inspirational friend who can come over.
At last, her fandom itself could contribute us by promoting the younger as well as people from other age groups. The readers would love to hear more about the latest upgrades to this library. Considering her first book launch, it could also help to promote her book. Therefore, this tie-up could be productive for both of us.
I am looking forward hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Nick
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-10-05 | Nancysachdeva | view | |
| 2023-09-19 | mehjabin | 78 | view |
| 2023-09-11 | drmona.914 | 73 | view |
| 2023-08-01 | Nguyen Thi Minh An | 84 | view |
| 2022-07-24 | kuldip.kumar@hotmail.com | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thomas
Dear Mr.Thomas, I hope this letter finds you in a g...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial media, she has done some exemplary work. Recently she is been in the acting...
^^
Line 14, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nick
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67326732673 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53124771189 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673267326733 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4170906131 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.5294117647 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8823529412 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131244330045 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421090013631 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312264535087 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628617546421 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335541114206 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.