You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.
Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail:
• suggest a speaker
• say what they would contribute to the event
• explain why other people would be interested too
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your e-mail as follows:
Dear...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Super Bookshop team,
I am writing this e-mail to suggest to you a proper spokesperson who was awarded the first prize in the international competition for writing inspiring books. Besides, this person also had eight experienced years at speaking in front of the public. And that is James Smith.
During eight experienced years, he has had considerable achievements. First of all, this was his first publication when he was twenty years old. The name of it is " Keep doing what you are doing". After being published on the Internet and displayed in bookshops at the center of the city, this book sold out in the first five days. With this admirable accomplishment, Mr.Smith and his team will also give away unpublished books to audiences and the employees at the bookshops. Next, he will sincerely share about his life as well as what he experienced. One special part of his demonstration is he will listen to shares or opinions from the audiences and the other specialists since he claims that at his demonstrating part not only has contributory ideas from his side but also has from the other sides. And this gives rise to the iconic trait between him and the other speakers.
Apart from this, the most attractive thing about his demonstration is his humorous personality. This is the key factor that keeps the audience enjoying the atmosphere there.
I hope that you will read my e-mail and consider my suggestion.
Best regards,
Jessica Stewart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
... With this admirable accomplishment, Mr.Smith and his team will also give away unpubl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, well, apart from, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00809716599 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8498458555 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5435680352 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145210156564 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453144673669 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367547597399 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889017592676 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161791722535 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.