Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding your consideration of the closure of our community sports and leisure center. The closure of this important facility can have detrimental and irreversible negative consequences on the living standard of the residents of this council.
The sports and leisure center is regularly visited by my friends and family as it provides us an opportunity to not only socialise but also to keep in good health by regularly exercising using the available exercise equipments and playing the physical games such badminton and basketball.
It is imperative to realise that shutting down such beneficial service will have adverse impact on the local public as the residents of this small town already have less number of health and social activities. The general public of this town are going to suffer due to lack of physical activities as it will give rise to number of serious health problems such as obesity and heart diseases. In addition to that, it will increase the risk for our youth to get involved in the wrongful activities to entertain themselves leaving an overall negative impact on the society.
Keeping in view the above concerns, it is requested to kindly remove the idea of the cessation of this highly valuable facility.
Kind Regards,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...er of health and social activities. The general public of this town are going to suffer due to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12093023256 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74998992082 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9248740006 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.625 76.5299724578 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13692667388 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517452678023 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773935433159 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785884770532 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748452086312 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 8.62886597938 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.