Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter,
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Alex, resident of Apartment-212B, Block D of the ‘Happy Estate’ community. I am writing this letter with reference to council’s on-going discussions over shutting down the sports and leisure facility. While I understand why it’s important to close this recreational facility, I want to express my thoughts on why it might not be a great move.
As you might be already well versed with the importance of work-life balance, I would like to emphasize that provision of recreational centres is a key to enhance one’s well-being. I usually return home by 5 PM everyday and I hit gym immediately with my friends. Also, my family joins me in leisure activities at the centre to spend quality time as well as indulge in some fun activities available.
Additionally, from a perspective of my neighbors and the friends across the community this facility plays a significant role in their personal lives. We are of an opinion that such centres are an opportunity to promote mental well-being and promote health consciousness.
If the council decides to shut down such facilities, local folks would be forced to find alternatives across the city. Initiatives like this could lead residents leave the community to find a better residential area with all the amenities. Would you kindly consider my thoughts in this regard?
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...this letter with reference to council’s on-going discussions over shutting down the spor...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ll-being. I usually return home by 5 PM everyday and I hit gym immediately with my frien...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, as well as, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18695652174 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10801451948 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665217391304 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6557615728 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189133875822 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622455115432 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630747007385 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940687973554 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436464743259 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.