Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to so.five details of when you would be available for this work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advert published in Times of India on 4 Oct 2019 regarding vacancy for unpaid worker for the hospital. It would be pleasurable for me if I get an opportunity for this work as I am an artist and in my leisure time, I feel relaxed if engaged in social activities.
If I would have given the choice, I prefer to work for a cancer epidemic people, taking care of such patients because I lost my grandfather due to this deadly illness. It would be fortunate to contribute my time for social welfare.
I am an employee in graphics institution, so it would be comfortable to take out evening hours from my schedule and available at any time on weekend as per your comfort.
You are requested to consider my interest and schedule my walk-in interview on Saturday as per your convenience between 10 Am to 8 pm and at any instant for online procedure.
Yours sincerely
Nike
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your advert ...
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Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had given'?
Suggestion: had given
...engaged in social activities. If I would have given the choice, I prefer to work for a canc...
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Line 19, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r online procedure. Yours sincerely Nike
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60714285714 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78296567697 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.626236077 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234863612379 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111519120622 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207447069268 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132504976563 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278673089674 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.