Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers. Readers are being encoraged to make suggestion sent in an email to the newspaper.
Write an email to the newspaper.
Suggest a topic that you think would be popular
Say why iy would be of interest
Explain why it is more relevant/intresting than other topic.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am inscribing this missive to give suggestion for new weekly column you are going to start. I am one of the regular reader of your newspaper.
As, majority of our area population is above eighteen and below forty mrans young, article on latest automobile industry would seems great idea. Younger generation are fond of new cars or bikes and always in search of technical specification or about their performance. So, having article with picture will attract child and their parents.
People these days looking for new article rather than boring news or television serials, this make article on automobile much attractive. Also, as this will be weekly blog, there will time for your team to do research and bring us latest news on car and bike industry.
I hope you would find mu suggestion helpful.
Thanking you
Yours sincerly
Anand Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...cle on latest automobile industry would seems great idea. Younger generation are fond...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'us the latest'.
Suggestion: us the latest
... for your team to do research and bring us latest news on car and bike industry. I hop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53333295261 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729166666667 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9715948526 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8888888889 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196931431763 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840746519776 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616124717302 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1263168805 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752633814192 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.