Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers. Readers are being encoraged to make suggestion sent in an email to the newspaper.
Write an email to the newspaper.
Suggest a topic that you think would be popular
Say why iy would be of interest
Explain why it is more relevant/intresting than other topic.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am inscribing this missive to give suggestion for new weekly column you are going to start. I am one of the regular reader of your newspaper.
As, majority of our area population is above eighteen and below forty means young, article on latest automobile industry would seem great idea. Younger generation are fond of new cars or bikes and always in search of technical specification or about their performance. So, having article with picture will attract child and their parents. We do also do not have much competition between newspaper on this subject.
People these days looking for new article rather than boring news or television serials, this make article on automobile much attractive. Also, as this will be weekly blog, there will time for your team to do research and bring us latest news on car and bike industry.
I hope you would find mu suggestion helpful.
Thanking you
Yours sincerly
Anand Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'us the latest'.
Suggestion: us the latest
... for your team to do research and bring us latest news on car and bike industry. I hop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08280254777 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56578029623 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71974522293 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2967361534 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205756478327 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828773117499 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585609905827 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133558755566 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067257450635 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.