you recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. you phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager.In your letter
1. Describe the problem with the equipment
2. Explain what happened when you phoned the shop
3 say what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I am inscribing this missive to complain about the coffee machine, that I have bought, last week, from your shop, and also about the service you provide.
Last Saturday, I bought the coffee machine and then installed it on the same day. It worked weel for first two days, on the third day, ot could not worked. I called on customer care number, the person there assured me thay, he would sent the concerned person to check it once, but no one cameor call. Then, again i call them up, and he once more promised me for return call. But, now its been three days, that I am waiting for some assistance.
Finally, I qm writing to you for further help, so , please can you send someone to get it repair or replace. You can call me on 45678912 for any query.
Inhope to hear positive and prompt action fro your side.
Thanking you
Your faithfully
Anand Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...wo days, on the third day, ot could not worked. I called on customer care number, the ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'send'
Suggestion: send
... person there assured me thay, he would sent the concerned person to check it once, ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce, but no one cameor call. Then, again i call them up, and he once more promised...
^
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...I qm writing to you for further help, so , please can you send someone to get it r...
^^
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'repairs'?
Suggestion: repairs
..., please can you send someone to get it repair or replace. You can call me on 45678912...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...hope to hear positive and prompt action fro your side. Thanking you Your fait...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1541604842 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70625 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2437572799 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20725222113 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796930679684 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057945680286 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112504038643 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468649239334 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.