Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing.
Write a letter to the librarian in your letter
-describe what you like about the library
-say what you don’t like
-make suggestions for improvements
Dear Ms Smith,
I am writing in relation to requested suggestions for improvement of the library.
First of all, I really appreciate reading and performing research in books and academic journals. Great resources are widely available in our local public library, it assures me to create excellent lectures to inspire and inform my students.
Nevertheless, there are some annoying circumstances that could be avoided such as queues.It is very disappointing to spend a lot of time waiting. Besides, almost all library's area is wide enough but unfortunately children's space and collection are so reduced therefore is always crowded.
I suggest that you hire more employees to help at attendance in order to reduce waiting time. Moreover, I would be grateful if kid's area were refurbished and expanded. It has been asked by parents for a long time. Furthermore, owning a cafeteria would be an appropriate enhancement.
I would appreciate your time and attention to these suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Anna Chandler
Comments
Dear Mr. Jamil, At the…
Dear Mr. Jamil,
At the outset, I would like to thank you for your thoughtful initiative to receive comments for necessary improvement of the library.
I am a frequent goer to your library for last 12 years and I love to spend my time to be there for diving into the realm of knowledge. Furthermore, my children are also very fond of books.
However, some improvements may be considered by you to ensure better services which I am sharing with this letter for your kind perusal.
First of all, the entrance of the library should be reconstructed as it has seriously damaged. If you feel it necessary, I may request some affluent members of the library to come forward and extend necessary financial support for the purpose. Secondly, all the staffs are also not cordial and some of them even do not have any idea of the sections in the library where the particular books are kept. Hence, all the staffs need to be well trained so that there will be no problem for the readers at all. A well equipped cafeteria will not only earn the revenue for the library but also cater the needs for the readers. You may consider to take an initiative for setting up of the same.
The above are my suggestions so far I can recollect at this shortest possible time. Anyway, you are always welcome to discuss any further issues that you deem appropriate for the library.
Assure my fullest support all the time.
Sincerely yours,
Sayedur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...es that could be avoided such as queues.It is very disappointing to spend a lot of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33928571429 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10907506971 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.761904761905 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6101418743 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.75 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108103938034 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353693120255 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285251898631 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499051553742 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015127163382 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.