You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am interested in an overseas opportunity to volunteer with the Cultural Expeditions. I fell passionate about the volunteering cause and it is generally agreed that your company is the leading authority in this matter. Furthermore, I would like to broaden my range of voluntary work because I appreciate being able to significantly contribute to develop childhood education.
I am currently a bilingual children instructor and a motivated professional with a variety of skills since I have experience with disabled kids. Moreover, I had spent two months in Paraguay teaching voluntarily in order to enhance my professional abilities as well as promote my own and local development.
I would like to volunteer to the position of children instructor for one month in Peru's next expedition. Nevertheless, if it does not occur I would go wherever possible.Therefore, I am able to contribute to the company as I have experience and no difficulty adapting to the requirements of the voluntary work position.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and attention.
Yours faithfully,
Anna Chandler
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rus next expedition. Nevertheless, if it does not occur I would go wherever possi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... not occur I would go wherever possible.Therefore, I am able to contribute to the company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33879781421 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43374690605 2.54303337028 135% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633879781421 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5465898208 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118337271485 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504650605785 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435386054087 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761939044313 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619940656268 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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