Eco certified Wood Products Integrated
Firstly, the lecturer states that American consumers do not treat all advertisements the same. They value and trust independent consumer agencies, mainly, eco-friendly consumers. This directly contradicts the reading passage that denotes that American consumers do not value labeled or certified products and that they generally do not trust advertising claims.
Secondly, the lecturer safely assumes that consumers value environment protection actions and measurements. Furthermore, it is stated that the price of products is the main factor when deciding between two products only if the cost difference is too high, which is not the case with certified wood. The certified wood cost difference is less than 5%. This idea strongly contrasts with the article that mentions that since consumers are motivated by the price they will probably buy uncertified wood because it cost less.
Finally, the lecturer believes that American wood companies should pay attention to the international market tendency not just because of the foreign consumers but due to the international competition. If the local wood companies do not offer certified wood certainly the international company will enter the market offering this unavailable product. The text, on the other hand, argues that only companies that export their products should seek certification in order to keep updated with the worldwide eco-friendly tendency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 30.3222958057 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69811320755 5.08290768461 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93174702514 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4873721266 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283796424376 0.272083759551 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11210021673 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089161280907 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183539286135 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556764666905 0.0443174109184 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.2367328918 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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