Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing.
Write a letter to the librarian in your letter
-describe what you like about the library
-say what you don’t like
-make suggestions for improvements
Dear Ms Smith,
I am writing in relation to the asked suggestions for the library.
First of all, I really appreciate to reading and perform researches in books and academic journals. Great resources are widely available in our local public library, it assures me to create excellent lectures to inspire and inform my students.
Nevertheless, there are some annoying circumstances that could be avoided such as queues.It is very disappointing to spend a lot of time waiting. Besides, children's space and collection are so reduced.
I suggest that you hire more employees to help at attendance in order to reduce waiting time. Moreover, I would be grateful if kid's area were refurbished and expanded. It has been asked by parents for so long. Furthermore, having a cafeteria would be a good enhancement.
I would appreciate your time and attention to these suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Anna Chandler
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...es that could be avoided such as queues.It is very disappointing to spend a lot of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19480519481 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03557364769 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746753246753 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9474925721 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105807581318 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347565601796 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286203899825 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481908659351 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254192145676 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.