Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take
Dear Ms Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well, As I recently received your compliment about the noise of my studio . I wish to apologize and explain about my staggering sounds yesterday.
Let me explain you in details. As you are aware, my brother-in-low was going to migrate to abroad. While they were getting ready to move, my family and I decided to make a goodbye party for them to make them happy. As my in-law’s house is too small, so, we decided to gather in my house. Besides that, one of my sibling has a noisy infant who always is crying and makes us to lose our tempers.
Furthermore, it’s undeniable making party always bother people whom are in vicinities. As your letter revealed you were sick .I wish you would accept my apologize about this issue which I brought to you.
Regard to this problem which made you insomnia, would you please tell me how can I recompense the problems that my guests has made for you? I was wondering to promise it never will be happen again and if I be in a bad position. I will ask your consent. Your tolerance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your Sincerely,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms Smith, I hope this letter f...
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Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... compliment about the noise of my studio . I wish to apologize and explain about m...
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Line 11, column 53, Rule ID: MOTHER-IN-LOW[1]
Message: You probably meant: 'brother-in-law'
Suggestion: brother-in-law
...in you in details. As you are aware, my brother-in-low was going to migrate to abroad. While t...
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Line 13, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s bother people whom are in vicinities. As your letter revealed you were sick .I w...
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Line 13, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s. As your letter revealed you were sick .I wish you would accept my apologize abo...
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Line 13, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... As your letter revealed you were sick .I wish you would accept my apologize abou...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61650485437 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58897538242 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0603236089 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9285714286 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277375601594 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104187179022 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948371612727 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183175277495 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077906192773 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.