Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Explain the reason for the noise
• Apologise
• Describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words
You do not need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows
Dear ………………………,
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint regarding the loud noise from my flat because of which you had to suffer. I apologise for the trouble caused and assure you that this will not happen again.
Last Sunday, I was trying to repair a broken window in my kitchen. Some children were playing cricket outside my house, by mistake, their cricket ball hit my kitchen window which broke its glass. Since, I do not have any prior experience the hammering and banging must have created a problem for you and your family.
I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused because of the lack of my knowledge. I was not aware that the noise will be so loud that it will reach to your flat.
As the work of the kitchen window is still not completed, I have decided to hire a professional. I will instruct him to keep the noise as low as possible. The work will be completed in a day or two.
Once again, I apologise for the problems faced by you. Please accept the box of chocolates as a token of my deepest regret for the disturbance faced by you due to my negligence.
Yours sincerely
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50731707317 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52478493439 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575609756098 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6515795057 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0769230769 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263115407042 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946507478302 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882153370821 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141135059133 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934851015137 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.