Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 wor

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise

apologise

describe what action you will take

You should write at least 150 words.

Hello Neighbours,

I am vicky from the flat no -118, I have recently moved to this apartment a week back. I received your complain regarding the noise coming from my Flat.

The noise is due to the renovation work which is happening in my apartment. The apartment has issues with the bathroom where the water draining is not functioning properly. The water gets accumulated on the bathroom floor due to which there is a lot is stale smell in the bathroom. I have to get this fixed before my family moves in next week.

I sincerely apologize to you for the inconvenience caused due to the renovation work as I should have informed you before the work begins.

As an action from my end, I will make sure that this renovation work get completed within 1 week as due to the weekends the labor is off duty and they do not work.

I hope you will understand my request.

Thank you
Vicky

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r draining is not functioning properly. The water gets accumulated on the bathroom ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54938271605 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56820540696 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4783474255 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184570962166 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820249428665 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744834124647 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10853440244 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680500085011 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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