You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
and make comparisons where relevant.

The plastic re-cycling process has a total of 9 major steps. It begins from collecting the plastic, processing it, and reusing it to manufacture products like Pens, bags, bottle etc.

To begin with, people need to dispose the plastic in a recycling bin, from there the trucks gathers the plastic and brings it to the factories. Here the workers begin the important task of segregating the bottles which can be re-cycle, and which cannot. Further steps include compressing these bottles in boxes, these boxes and then crushed, and washed. After the plastic is washed, this material is fed into the machine to produce plastic pellets. The pallets are then heated, and raw material is formed. The raw material is then packed and stored until they will be used to create many different types of products such as T-shirts, Pens, bags, containers, and water bottles. This product will be again sent to recycle once they are used.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...hich can be re-cycle, and which cannot. Further steps include compressing these bottles...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tored until they will be used to create many different types of products such as T-shirts, Pen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4071430383 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9176594633 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128169700762 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547043440455 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349461451713 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107371064294 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00537710346336 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.