Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Sir/Mam,
My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I have recently shifted to the next door. I received your letter in the morning which states that last night my house was noisy due to loud music. Actually, I had invited my new colleagues for a get together as I have joined a new office in the city.
I understand that I did not invited you and the rest of the neighbors to the party but, I have organized a party on coming Saturday evening for the residents of our society. And, I really apologize for the noise coming out last night due to loud music and my guests noise. I will make sure to use the society party hall for future occasions. I fully understand your complaint and I promise that it will not happen again.
I would like you to invite at my house tomorrow for afternoon tea for my flawed actions. My wife and I will be pleased to meet you and your family members.
I am looking forward to see you tomorrow.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'invite'
Suggestion: invite
...e city. I understand that I did not invited you and the rest of the neighbors to th...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mise that it will not happen again. I would like you to invite at my house to...
^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...family members. I am looking forward to see you tomorrow. Yours faithfully, Shw...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43016759777 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40123403872 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.499272487 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0909090909 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249922446688 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974349375784 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054019707095 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132232725685 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432942381603 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.